Some time ago I decided to watch a popular series ,,13 reasons why” based on a book ,,13 reasons why” by Jay Asher. After watching the series I had mixed feelings, did not delight me, did not make any ‘WOW’ as with other people who also watched it. Despite this lack of ‘WOW’, something was slowly born in my head. I started to think about how our behavior could affect another person. How can we inadvertently hurt someone? Some situations that seem completely indifferent to us may be of great importance to someone else - and vice versa. Someone will hurt you a lot and you are not even aware of that. Because we are different and other things are more or less important to us. After a few days of reflection I understood a few things and tried to change for the better and think about how to relate to my peers so as do not make them unhappy Finally I would like to add that everybody should watch it.
I agree with what you write but in my opinion there is confusion in your work, you start writing about something, you don't end this thought and you start with the second one and then return to the first one and you don't describe any of tchem exactly. I think you should focus on one thing and think about it rather than write a few things that do not match. :)
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